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Someday Means For Never by ~LordOfSenses:iconLordOfSenses:





In awhile a day will pass,
The day will change it’s clothes
And I’ll have missed you for a week,
I think I understand
Even if you won’t say,
And that’s okay,
My patients wore thin long ago
And now I have something more…

I have a heart with which to love
And arms to hold in my affection,
I care more for your eyes
Than for your parts that give me an erection,
And I know sometimes I’m silly
And my ways don’t quite make sense,
But if you listen close
You can hear my heart…
It beats just like everyone else’s…
Stab me and I will die,
I will die for you,
Not because you’ve earned it
But because you deserve it,
Friendship is so rare
I’m lucky to believe it’s real.

And I,
Break the madness
In this see through fit,
I’m starting to buckle
Under all this shit!
But I,
Feel diluted,
I’m kinda dead,
I just don’t care,
Not everything hurts,
Just heart and head!
©2005-2009 ~LordOfSenses
:iconlordofsenses:

Author's Comments

originally inspired by sam...but it evolved.

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:icondrsheeeeet:
Very well written piece. :comfort:

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:omg: Gaze in awe, foolish mortal! :omg:

"We train young men to drop fire on people. But their commanders won't allow them to write "fuck" on their airplanes because it's obscene!" -- Apocalypse Now
:iconlordofsenses:
oh yea, the end part is screamed, the rest is all wishy washy

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69 - your IQ, not a sexual position
There's nothing worse than a false disposition.
:icondrsheeeeet:
Ah... I can see it...

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:omg: Gaze in awe, foolish mortal! :omg:

"We train young men to drop fire on people. But their commanders won't allow them to write "fuck" on their airplanes because it's obscene!" -- Apocalypse Now
:iconzodian:
Good poem, well written :thumbsup:
:iconlordofsenses:
Thanks much.

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69 - your IQ, not a sexual position
There's nothing worse than a false disposition.
:iconjannys-dawntracker:
I love how the last part rhymes more then the rest, and I can see it, as you've said, being screamed.

Well written, and chalk full of raw emotional goodness. :hug:

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give Medusa more *HUGS*

Make Someone Happy!
:iconlordofsenses:
Thanks.

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69 - your IQ, not a sexual position
There's nothing worse than a false disposition.
:icondevilnsatin:
Very nice. I like this alot, one of your best peices I do believe and thus it gets a fav.
:iconbadpoet:
I love how you start it out with your deep feelings for someone and you add the cute part about the eyes to break up the seriousness. A little comedic relief. It's really good. :)

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"~**~"

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